Hey, Lorna. I like the line about "weathered wood and sand". It has a visual effect and reminds me of the abandoned barn that I grew up near.
I like the line "leads home in winter blights". It's a good way of ending the very, very short story.
Hey Lorna I really like the the last story about following the North Star.
Hey, Lorna. I like the line about "weathered wood and sand". It has a visual effect and reminds me of the abandoned barn that I grew up near.
ReplyDeleteI like the line "leads home in winter blights". It's a good way of ending the very, very short story.
ReplyDeleteHey Lorna I really like the the last story about following the North Star.
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